Looks beautiful! Too long. I would probably cut it in half. You wouldn't even necessarily need to cut any particular shots out. They just linger too long.
Just one example -- "Where you been all my life? That's what I would say. Umm..."
We already know that's what he would say. And why do we need to hear him say "umm..."? This particular shot is WAY too long, and I feel the same way about almost the entire film.
Regardless, I think you did a nice job, overall.