Is this helpful in marketing or fund raising?

[Modern Day Myth Prod. LLC]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zOYHRgobEro

This is the extended version of our artistic commentary for the NYTVF. Their version is edited down to one minute. Besides throwing this on a DVD for the cast with the production, do you think this may be useful for crowd funding and to show investors?

Here is the edited down version for the festival.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EZy_18BGC1g

 

[Boxt]

But late to the discussion but here goes: the video does nothing for fundraising. You can still do another one, not for the prize but for fundraising.

Firstly, you need to talk to the camera. You both should talk to camera, separately.
Secondly, you would be better off getting some good quality concept artwork to illustrate your idea if you are not able to do VFX justice.
Thirdly, tell people precisely what you are going to do with the money.
Lastly, use a litte showmanship. If you cannot demonstrate your creativity with the camera for a22-minute pitch, why would people assume you can do that for 40-minutes.

 

[Murdock]

IMO, and this is serious, you need more diet Pepsi.