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  1. PassionPulp

    Children and Horror

    I'll start off by saying I was an odd child, and I'm sure I've never grown out of it. And I've always had a pretty extensive memory. I've had a long-lived affair with Horror films. Sad to say, as this is true and I am now 16, meaning there has been some questionable factors in my upbringing. I...
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    Horror Cliche

    I've been a long time horror fan, like many film enthusiasts. So I almost feel an obligation to contribute to the genre. Something fresh too, not the stereotypical B or slasher movie. Because of this, I went out of my way to eliminate the cliches that bug me so much. Yes, it is about a group...
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    Jaw/Javelina

    I guess I'm doing the Script Frenzy ish. After about a year of mulling over one premise, I figured it's time to start raising this puppy. It's going better than I thought it would. The problem is that I feel what I have now is too short compared to all the substance that I've worked hard on...
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    Ya like?

    Tell me what you think http://crocodoc.com/UeQ8WBB
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    Eraserhead

    I just watched Eraserhead. It completely blew my mind. Lady in the Radiator. That feeling you get right after you see a film that you couldn't get your mind out of. The beautiful, perfect ending. I've only had this feeling with two other films, both Kubrick. 2001: and Dr. Strangelove. I will...
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    Script for review

    You're hard, and I know that all too well. Downloaded all the right ish, did the format. If you're happy with the format, you're unhappy with the dialogue. And I thought about taking this out and just providing the link, but I do also enjoy the pretentious appearence. As I'm nowhere near...
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    Jaw: It's what you don't care for; A screenplay

    Hey diddle diddle, Cat and the Fiddle. I tried very hard to actually get the small amount of screenplay I had read. But I was told it was not the right format, therefore impossible to read. So I did the best I could to format it accordingly. Even if it meant stripping the detail I worked hard...
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    First draft. I'm a virgin.

    yeah yeah yeah I know what you'll say. Reads like a book. No structure. Dialogue could be lots better. Not caring about that now. I just want to know your opinion on the play of the tale. How you visualize it. What you think needs touching on. This is the product of me, laying at home...
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    Jaw

    Ay I started her. And she's very pretty. This probably is in a very unacceptable screenplay format. I've been told that my descriptions would fit more in a novel. But I kind of don't care because I'm my own filmmaker. I'm not too consistent with my spacing, but no big deal. I'm also not too...
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    Hitchcock's "The Birds"

    Am I the only person that found this film extremely laughable? I seriously have not laughed at a movie hard enough as I laughed at this one. The main female lead, Melanie, drives like a maniac. The scene where she drives to Bodega Bay, her driving seems normal, but it sounds as if she's in a...
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    Indians

    I plan on writing a psychological thriller titled "Jaw" about a group of live and spirit Navajo Indians angered by a pack of mountain climbers who illegally climb a sacred rock formation in the New Mexico desert. I've always been fascinated with Native Americans and their history in the new...
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    It's a good intro, how I see it.

    I finished this screenplay. A full feature length screenplay. About 200 pages. Then I had some second thoughts about how I feel about it. It didn't flow. So I erased it. Then I rearranged the pieces. It fits. And I like it. Most of my friends don't share the same love of films like I do. So I...
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    Linear

    What would I do to show a nonlinear storyline in a screenplay. I've read over it in the linear style, and I didn't like it. I found that rearranging the scenes would keep the audience alert rather it take so long and have to wait for the conflict. I've loved Quentin Tarantino's work and Gus Van...
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    Kubricy

    I've been in a Kubrick loop today because I love getting into that Kubrick Ambiance. I see the individuality in each of his films, but also the similarity. There is a level of how fast each film goes and each film genre he's conformed to. 2001: A Space Odyssey has to be my favorite by means of...
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    Lapse

    I am writing my first screenplay. It really didn't take long. And it's not bad. But my style, I'd have to say, favors Kubrick and Van Sant, who both are known for taking their time in their films. So there is a lot of time lapse in my writing. I may double space in scenes that take more than a...
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    Format

    I got into the writing without really following the rules. I'd seen others screenplays and I didn't really get the format. It's pretty much the same. All I did differently was leave out the Int. when changing a scene, and I use spacing to show time lapse. When I introduce a character, I...
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    Aspiring.

    I'm starting to believe that it was a joke at the beginning. Kind of "If I could do one thing in the world, what would it be?" I would have chosen to make a movie. It's been a dream of mine. Films were always in my mind. As a young child, from 8-11, I remember waking up at late hours of the...
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