Recent content by Egidio

LoL??? Are you writing a screenplay or what? What are you doing here, beside making me really, really sad? :(

Uhm...maybe you're right. :D

Hey, guys... I'm writing the second episode of my series, a straight continue to the pilot, we pick up just from the last scene of the latter. What do I write on scene heading? CONTINUOUS???

Can anybody check my pilot script to find any grammar errors?!?! I need a person to do that for free tho, as I'm broke...LoL

uhmmm...I'm thinking about to enter the comptetition with my 60-minute Pilot Script.

BARRY A few of my men were arrested in Baltimore. I need someone I can trust, to ensure our operations in the city proceed on schedule CLARK Im not much of a diplomat. A pondering beat. BARRY Dandy.

I'd go with: Chorus of War Logline is good but you should delete the name. Just go like this: "An aspiring singer is launched in to unfamiliar territory when he is drafted to fight in WWII, where he must learn to adapt or die." ;)

you right, :yes: <3

Please contact me in private: egidioconcas88@gmail.com I'm really really interested.

I'm reading Truby tho =P

thanks =)

I just read save the cat! Brilliant, really helpful on so many levels...Now I just started Story: Style, Structure, Substance, and the Principles of Screenwriting, but some of amazon reviews are making me changing my mind, they say go Truby instead...what shoud I do? Because I have The anatomy...

I'm confused, you're telling these books are both good and bad? ahahaah!

Hey guys! I've just finished reading SAVE THE CAT!, it was soooo good! It illuminated me so much! There are some tricks that I loved and shure will help me! One question tho: Although it has like over 500 5 stars reviews on Amazon, some of them are 1 star and some people say this is considered...

granted it a quick glance at the form, as I'm working on mine right now. a note: 1) ROAD WORKER WITH THE PHONE sounds weird, just put ROAD WORKER and then (into the phone) with parenthesis. 2) you typed VO in his thoughts instead of V.O.