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    First scene of big dialogue: critique please

    LoL??? Are you writing a screenplay or what? What are you doing here, beside making me really, really sad? :(
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    Two formatting questions...

    Uhm...maybe you're right. :D
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    Two formatting questions...

    Hey, guys... I'm writing the second episode of my series, a straight continue to the pilot, we pick up just from the last scene of the latter. What do I write on scene heading? CONTINUOUS???
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    Showtime Tony Cox Screenwriting Competition

    Can anybody check my pilot script to find any grammar errors?!?! I need a person to do that for free tho, as I'm broke...LoL
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    Showtime Tony Cox Screenwriting Competition

    uhmmm...I'm thinking about to enter the comptetition with my 60-minute Pilot Script.
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    Need help with a line

    BARRY A few of my men were arrested in Baltimore. I need someone I can trust, to ensure our operations in the city proceed on schedule CLARK Im not much of a diplomat. A pondering beat. BARRY Dandy.
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    Need Help With Title + Logline

    I'd go with: Chorus of War Logline is good but you should delete the name. Just go like this: "An aspiring singer is launched in to unfamiliar territory when he is drafted to fight in WWII, where he must learn to adapt or die." ;)
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    Truby or McKee?

    you right, :yes: <3
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    Story Writer needed for short film project

    Please contact me in private: egidioconcas88@gmail.com I'm really really interested.
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    Truby or McKee?

    I'm reading Truby tho =P
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    Truby or McKee?

    thanks =)
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    Truby or McKee?

    I just read save the cat! Brilliant, really helpful on so many levels...Now I just started Story: Style, Structure, Substance, and the Principles of Screenwriting, but some of amazon reviews are making me changing my mind, they say go Truby instead...what shoud I do? Because I have The anatomy...
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    Michael Rogan tips.

    I'm confused, you're telling these books are both good and bad? ahahaah!
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    Michael Rogan tips.

    Hey guys! I've just finished reading SAVE THE CAT!, it was soooo good! It illuminated me so much! There are some tricks that I loved and shure will help me! One question tho: Although it has like over 500 5 stars reviews on Amazon, some of them are 1 star and some people say this is considered...
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    Over and Over (short screenplay)

    granted it a quick glance at the form, as I'm working on mine right now. a note: 1) ROAD WORKER WITH THE PHONE sounds weird, just put ROAD WORKER and then (into the phone) with parenthesis. 2) you typed VO in his thoughts instead of V.O.
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    What do you think of my scene?

    What about grammar? =(
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    Is one month ok for a first draft?

    ahahha, I was just kidding =) Anyway, wow, 3 days, he must have been brainstormed the shit out of him...can't imagine the headache :lol:
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    Is one month ok for a first draft?

    Michael Arndt wrote the first draft of Little Miss Sunshine in 3 days, so yes, one month is definitely way wayyy to much ;)
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    Brands & Trademarks

    I think this case is similar as the videogame "Granturismo." It's a real driving simulator, but it has been always lacking of "car damages effects" because the cars manufacturers didn't want their car smashed and appear weak, so they've never gave the videogame studio the right to do such a...
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    Brands & Trademarks

    Or maybe a BLUE MEMORABLE, ahahaha. No, seriously tho, do you think RED EPIC is keepable?
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