Title: Whispers From Beyond
Logline: After inheriting an old 1800s estate, Chalise Ellison starts having dreams which turn out to be messages from a ghost. Its up to her to help the ghost move on and to unravel the secrets of the Wheeler Estate.
Pages: 15 in total - 1st has 4, 2nd has 5 and 3rd has 6.
Basically, for my college project I decided to make a story and write three scenes from different points in the plot to demonstrate my learnt skills in scriptwriting, and part of the criteria is presenting to an audience. I have written 3 different moments from my story; an opening scene, a moment of realisation for my main character, and an important emotional shift for her. Any and all feedback will be highly appreciated
Logline: After inheriting an old 1800s estate, Chalise Ellison starts having dreams which turn out to be messages from a ghost. Its up to her to help the ghost move on and to unravel the secrets of the Wheeler Estate.
Pages: 15 in total - 1st has 4, 2nd has 5 and 3rd has 6.
Basically, for my college project I decided to make a story and write three scenes from different points in the plot to demonstrate my learnt skills in scriptwriting, and part of the criteria is presenting to an audience. I have written 3 different moments from my story; an opening scene, a moment of realisation for my main character, and an important emotional shift for her. Any and all feedback will be highly appreciated