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DesperadoMan17

DesperadoMan17

Hey guys! havent been on here for awhile. And the reason is that I had someone going to write a short script for me but his schedule is really busy. So I was wondering if anyone would want to take his spot and help me write a short so I can direct. I really want to film something this summer. And no disrespect to NickClapper, but his schedule is really busy thats why I am looking for someone else.
 
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I'm sincerely sorry Nick got overbooked. The guy does put in the time, don't he?
Oh, well.


Well, if anyone else want's a headzup on what DMan needs for a short script...
http://www.indietalk.com/showthread.php?t=38672

He'd like an action/adventure short script:
http://www.indietalk.com/showthread.php?t=37837

Especially a heist film, (last we heard).
http://www.indietalk.com/showthread.php?t=38856

Hey, DMan, you still considering zombie shorts, as well?
http://www.indietalk.com/showthread.php?t=30547
 
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Jacob,

Care to list your resources, proposed budget, and timeframe for shooting?
Is this script based on an idea you already have mapped out?
What genre are you leaning toward?
Can you post something here that you've already shot, produced and/or directed?
Do you cast according to the parts as written (old man, 40s soccer mom, 4-year old brat) or do you tend to pull from your circle of friends?

Just curious!

* also, what sort of locations do you have access to? anything interesting and out of the norm?
 
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rayw said:
I'm sincerely sorry Nick got overbooked. The guy does put in the time, don't he?
Oh, well.


Well, if anyone else want's a headzup on what DMan needs for a short script...
http://www.indietalk.com/showthread.php?t=38672

He'd like an action/adventure short script:
http://www.indietalk.com/showthread.php?t=37837

Especially a heist film, (last we heard).
http://www.indietalk.com/showthread.php?t=38856

Hey, DMan, you still considering zombie shorts, as well?
http://www.indietalk.com/showthread.php?t=30547
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Dude whats your problem? Yea so what if I posted all those. Filming is what I want to do with my life and if that takes posting millions of threads to find the best script then I am going to do that.
 
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Dennis Mikula Films said:
I've got a 40 page one that has been sitting on my desk. Is that short? Haha
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That might be to long..
Flicker Pictures said:
Jacob,

Care to list your resources, proposed budget, and timeframe for shooting?
Is this script based on an idea you already have mapped out?
What genre are you leaning toward?
Can you post something here that you've already shot, produced and/or directed?
Do you cast according to the parts as written (old man, 40s soccer mom, 4-year old brat) or do you tend to pull from your circle of friends?

Just curious!

* also, what sort of locations do you have access to? anything interesting and out of the norm?
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I have a guy that has been in the business for 30 plus years. He has a lot of other people he works with. I really dont have a budget. Well this would be my first short film so maybe like 10-15 pages. The only thing I have directed is a doritos superbowl commercial..
 
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DesperadoMan17 said:
Dude whats your problem? Yea so what if I posted all those. Filming is what I want to do with my life and if that takes posting millions of threads to find the best script then I am going to do that.
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I apologize.
I shouldn't put such effort into helping the people you want to write something for you.

You should post millions of threads simply asking for scripts.
Gopherit.

BOL!
 
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I have a guy that has been in the business for 30 plus years. He has a lot of other people he works with. I really dont have a budget. Well this would be my first short film so maybe like 10-15 pages. The only thing I have directed is a doritos superbowl commercial..
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OK, thanks for posting that info, Jacob.

The guy you have that's been in the business for 30 years, what's he all about? Is he a camera guy? Sound guy? Line producer?

The more specific you are with your requests, the easier it will be for someone to offer help.

Let's say a writer spends their time penning something up for you, is there any guarantee you'll be able to pull the production together?

I'm not (we're not) trying to come off as argumentative or bossy, but the more details you can share with us about your process and what you already have lined up, the easier it will be for folks to assess whether or not they can jump in and work with you.

Can you post a link to your Dorito's ad?
 
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Flicker Pictures said:
OK, thanks for posting that info, Jacob.

The guy you have that's been in the business for 30 years, what's he all about? Is he a camera guy? Sound guy? Line producer?

The more specific you are with your requests, the easier it will be for someone to offer help.

Let's say a writer spends their time penning something up for you, is there any guarantee you'll be able to pull the production together?

I'm not (we're not) trying to come off as argumentative or bossy, but the more details you can share with us about your process and what you already have lined up, the easier it will be for folks to assess whether or not they can jump in and work with you.

Can you post a link to your Dorito's ad?
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http://youtu.be/SiCv7U0kIyg

My friend is the camera guy. I forget what camera he has. I think a panasonic. Right now I dont know his schedule so i dont know how busy he is. But I would gurentee production. He said he would help me if the right script comes up.
 
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DesperadoMan17 said:
... Filming is what I want to do with my life ...
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DesperadoMan17 said:
I have a guy that has been in the business for 30 plus years. He has a lot of other people he works with. I really dont have a budget. Well this would be my first short film so maybe like 10-15 pages. The only thing I have directed is a doritos superbowl commercial..
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If you want make filmmaking part of your life, you need to learn all the facets. Writing a 10-15 page script is not that difficult. Every filmmaker needs to understand the mechanics of scriptwriting, as well as videography, editing, and acting. It doesn't hurt to study sound and lighting. You also need learn about the business side. It's a great idea to also volunteer your time on other people's sets as a production assistant to learn the ropes. Be involved in productions. Be an extra or actor to see the styles of other directors. Being a director without any experience outside of a Dorito's commercial is like trying to be CEO of construction company and unable to read the blueprints or have experience with carpentry, plumbing or electrical work. "Well, I built a treehouse...."

I'm not saying this to be hard on you, but really you need to gain more experience by doing. Relying on a guy with 30+ years experience to do the filming does not help you ... if you're trying to make this what you want to do with your life. You need to learn this business from the ground up. Even successful screenwriters often start out as readers.

Look at youTube. You got kids who are 9 putting up some very clever 5 minute shorts that they've written, shot, edited and put in special effects themselves. If this is your life ambition, you need to tackle all aspects. It doesn't mean you enjoy or will do all these proficiently, but you can't start at the top (director) without learning the basics. And you can only learn those by doing.

Write up your idea and post it here for feedback. We can help you craft a good story and screenplay that you can shoot. But, sincerely, the most successful directors in Hollywood (or elsewhere) often produce their own scripts. My advice is that you write your screenplay, let people here help you hone it, then get your experienced friend to teach you how to film and edit it. Get your friends together and shoot it yourself. Keep the setting simple to your house or a location you can easily access. That's how most of us get into it. Trying to start at the top without experience is a recipe for disaster. Every director starts out as production assistant on other people's movies.

Good luck!
 
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I may be able to help you out here.

I have a little crime short, "To Love a Gun". It's bad-ass, gritty and the plot is intricate, and smart, I dare say- but it has plenty of action- all under a reasonable budget. However, I want to fix it up a bit and make it a little more interesting- so I ask you this, can your budget handle a minor car crash (no mass destruction, just a little broadside)?

Anyway, shoot me a PM with an e-mail so I can send you a copy. Thanks!
 
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