Hi Thimmy, and thanks for sharing it with us.
I too sensed that the camera feels restricted, and while its nice to have a steady tripod shot, you might have tried adding several close ups/different angles, to montage them in and add dynamic feel to the visuals.
For the sound my advise would be to:
1) Cleaning the background noise some more, and give the voices a "presence" boost.
2) Round it off with a background music, and maybe a few sounds.
3) Make sure the intro smoothly transitions into the background music. It theoretically could be the same music playing softer in the background, but I prefer another technique, where the energetic intro fades into similar, BUT slower, laid back music, which gives base to your text and drama. Anyway the current state, when its just vanishes into silence is the least pleasant option.
Hope it helps.
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