watch Twist of fate: a short film

[Japaneezy]

My first short movie ever for a photography class. I was not into making films before but this project has really got me interested in doing more. Im the guy with the glasses by the way B-) Let me know if you have any valuable advice. What I did right, what I did wrong, what to avoid for next time? Thanks and Enjoy!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IzBKTea8iL0

 

[PaulGriffith]

Hey man, great first film!

Let me know if you have any valuable advice.

I'd like to hear the story too next time. Silent movies can get a little old fast sometimes.

Yeah, though, great job!

 

[MissingProductions]

Were the shots meant to be sideways sometimes?

 

[Japaneezy]

Hey man, great first film!



I'd like to hear the story too next time. Silent movies can get a little old fast sometimes.

Yeah, though, great job!

Thanks, Ill work on the story for next time!

 

[Japaneezy]

Were the shots meant to be sideways sometimes?

DO you mean a little crooked? Yeah, my friend didnt really know how to film, it was his first try. Thats why loll.

 

[kinglis]

3. Having music to cover for the lack of sound is tiring.
2. You're not a good actor... yet
1. The story is shallow.

 

[Japaneezy]

Yeah I know my acting wasnt oscar worthy loll. Please keep in mind this was for a photography class and filming isnt even my program at school. But thanks for the advice and I will keep it in mind and work on those points.