Hello everyone, (Think I got the thread in the right spot this time)
I am finishing up writing a screenplay for a short film..and I'm absolutely stuck. It needs something. We started filming a few scenes.. and It went pretty well.. but I just don't buy it. We are barely into filming, in such that I was tossing a few more idea changes around. The premise of the screenplay is solid...its just that my "execution" if you will, is not. I think that with this solid idea, It could be an outstanding film, but I'm not quite certain if it's all there yet. It needs something. I would love to have suggestions, ideas, whatever..because I'm pretty much stuck.
I can't attach files on here, if i can, tell me if I'm wrong, but shoot me an email and I can send you the pdf? It's roughly 10 pages, It's not anything you have to sit down for hours over. I would appreciate any advice!!!!!
deabler.quentin@gmail.com
I am finishing up writing a screenplay for a short film..and I'm absolutely stuck. It needs something. We started filming a few scenes.. and It went pretty well.. but I just don't buy it. We are barely into filming, in such that I was tossing a few more idea changes around. The premise of the screenplay is solid...its just that my "execution" if you will, is not. I think that with this solid idea, It could be an outstanding film, but I'm not quite certain if it's all there yet. It needs something. I would love to have suggestions, ideas, whatever..because I'm pretty much stuck.
I can't attach files on here, if i can, tell me if I'm wrong, but shoot me an email and I can send you the pdf? It's roughly 10 pages, It's not anything you have to sit down for hours over. I would appreciate any advice!!!!!
deabler.quentin@gmail.com