Let me know what you think of this logline:
After a botched bank heist, a band of thieves hijack a van from two nuns and an orphan only to end up trapped in a cat and mouse game with a horde of soul sucking, flesh eating demons in an old country church.
Too long? Too detailed? Not long or detailed enough? Does it portray the High Concept well? Does it entice you to read it?
Poke
After a botched bank heist, a band of thieves hijack a van from two nuns and an orphan only to end up trapped in a cat and mouse game with a horde of soul sucking, flesh eating demons in an old country church.
Too long? Too detailed? Not long or detailed enough? Does it portray the High Concept well? Does it entice you to read it?
Poke