Hey,
The trailer's got material. But I think the old man's acting is bit overboard. And the lion should've been introduced when the old man sounds, "roar"! Would've given a dramatic touch!
And the trailer should have ended at 0:50. Instead another thirty seconds of black screen and titles on them is a bit tiring and kinda takes away all that impression your visuals made!
ANyways, all the best! keep up the good work!
Cheers!
The trailer's got material. But I think the old man's acting is bit overboard. And the lion should've been introduced when the old man sounds, "roar"! Would've given a dramatic touch!
And the trailer should have ended at 0:50. Instead another thirty seconds of black screen and titles on them is a bit tiring and kinda takes away all that impression your visuals made!
ANyways, all the best! keep up the good work!
Cheers!