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watch The Official Teaser Trailer is Out!!!

Hey,

The trailer's got material. But I think the old man's acting is bit overboard. And the lion should've been introduced when the old man sounds, "roar"! Would've given a dramatic touch!

And the trailer should have ended at 0:50. Instead another thirty seconds of black screen and titles on them is a bit tiring and kinda takes away all that impression your visuals made!

ANyways, all the best! keep up the good work!

Cheers!
 
Hey,

The trailer's got material. But I think the old man's acting is bit overboard. And the lion should've been introduced when the old man sounds, "roar"! Would've given a dramatic touch!

And the trailer should have ended at 0:50. Instead another thirty seconds of black screen and titles on them is a bit tiring and kinda takes away all that impression your visuals made!

ANyways, all the best! keep up the good work!

Cheers!

Hey! Thanks a lot for your feedback!

I actually wanted the old man to be that way. He's supposed to be this energetic and fun dad. In a way, he's trying to impress his son by trying to be "cool". Plus he's a theater actor so that wasn't very hard for him to do. :)

I agree with the length. I could definitely see it being shorter but it just felt right at the moment.

Thanks again man! Appreciate it.
 
I know this is an old thread but just watched your trailer...

I think you've intended this to be a light hearted drama - it actually has more potential as a psychological heavy going drama or even a psychological thriller. I'm serious. I found it quite disturbing, the father's expressions...the editing of the trailer. This could be about the father's decline mentally and it would have a more profound effect. Good job though.

+1 on praise for how it looks, you did a great job with achieving that look.
 
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