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watch The Accident - Comedy Short Film

This is actually pretty good. Got small chuckles through the whole thing. A few things could be changed, but keep it up.
 
the lighting between each shot was completely different, i thought that was badly done, like one minute he has a shadow over his face the next minute he has a fully lit face...

it was put well together, although i only chuckled slightly at 3:00 im english so maybe the humour isnt the same, i felt there were certain points at which you had hook lined then failed to sink, the potential was there to make my eyes water but it never happened.

im a harsh critic but im also a fair one, and you need someone whos honest about the flaws right?

but i did like it :)
 
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