Hi guys.
Anybody fancy having a read of the last 11 pages of my most recent screenplay? It's mainly dialogue, so it shouldn't take too long to read.
Not too long ago, I asked a few questions about motiveless killers and endings where the killer gets away with their crimes. Well, this is what it was for! I finally got around to finishing this off.
As this is only the ending of the script, I'd best give a little of the back story... Our protagonists are a regular group of college students, whose friends are being violently murdered by a killer known locally as "The Ripper". The script picks up at the point where Jenny, the "final girl", has been chased by the Ripper and they have ended up in her garage. Two of her friends, Claire and Adam have both disappeared, setting them up as possible killers...
Anyhow, HERE IT IS.
Does it work? Is it any good? Is it too over-complicated? Is it even remotely believable?
Anybody fancy having a read of the last 11 pages of my most recent screenplay? It's mainly dialogue, so it shouldn't take too long to read.
Not too long ago, I asked a few questions about motiveless killers and endings where the killer gets away with their crimes. Well, this is what it was for! I finally got around to finishing this off.
As this is only the ending of the script, I'd best give a little of the back story... Our protagonists are a regular group of college students, whose friends are being violently murdered by a killer known locally as "The Ripper". The script picks up at the point where Jenny, the "final girl", has been chased by the Ripper and they have ended up in her garage. Two of her friends, Claire and Adam have both disappeared, setting them up as possible killers...
Anyhow, HERE IT IS.
Does it work? Is it any good? Is it too over-complicated? Is it even remotely believable?