watch Short Ghost thriller movie.. seeing Feedback!

[Derekhhh]

Hey all,
Here's an old thriller I made back in 2009. I'm planning another one soon so I want some feedback to help me improve. This was my second film.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aLaBLSpCx_M

I would really appreciate some constructive criticisms or overall thoughts!
Thanks

 

[brianluce]

I made to 8:30 which is about 8 minutes longer than I usually give to links from people I don't know. So I thought what I saw was good. I like your visual style. The location audio sounded thin on my speakers, like the actors weren't mic'd close enough.
My least favorite part of your skill set is your action spikes, they don't work for me.
I like that lead actor of yours. He's good.
Do you think it could be shorter? Seems slow, you could save 1:30 by skipping all the credits, put them at the end.
Good job though.