Pretty good and clever story. Probably one of the best of the litter of what I've seen (thus far) dealing with these 48 hour film things. Maybe some minor issues of placement of talent in the frame. A little bounce light would have helped those shadows at the restaurant.
Sound was fine and the background music was well done.
Editing pacing was fine with me. Conversation at the beginning could have been tricky but seems like you landed it.
Acting was great.
I would like to see what you could do without the 48 shackles.
Great job and good luck.