Thanks for responding to my post. I emailed you all the first 40 pages. I usually work on an old typewriter so I had to re-type it in wordpad and that was as far as I got. Once again, thank you.
Yes, I know I made another big scene, but I would really like some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism from you guys. I won't have a meltdown-promise (I'm taking my meds). I'm not sure if this is too soon to ask (if you've finished reading it)as I've never submitted pages to a forum before. Thanks in advance.
Didn't think you were talking to me . I know you're busy with the competition but can I have your email and I'll send my work. Whenever you can get around to reading it- it would be much appreciated! Thanks.
Will,
Thanks! Am sending it out to you.
Steve,
Once again, thank you for taking the time to read and critique my work. I (truly) look forward to hearing what you have to say to help me improve the piece. I continue to work on it and will forward the complete piece when done.
Bird ... I'm sorry that I have not responded ... I must have skipped over this thread a time or two because I never was aware that you sent it to me ... I just checked my Hotmail account and it is not there ... can you please resend it?
I apologize if this appears self-serving, but my thread is coming dangerously close to leaping onto page 2. Therefore I must *bump*. I still am very much interested in more feedback. (I've revised and added more pages) Thanks!
I'd be happy to read it. I'm off this week and just about done with mine ((literally have about half a page to go), so send it along and I'll look at it.