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watch Only, A short based on Fredric Brown's "Knock"

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DavidIanHart

The last man on Earth sat in a room alone. There was a knock at the door.

The first time I read that short horror story, I got chills and inspiration. This is my first short of 2015. I literally shot this all myself with a tripod, so for what it is, I'm happy with it. I'd love some feedback and thoughts on it.

https://vimeo.com/115891846
 
I like this but I dont understand the use of the gas mask if all of his skin is exposed and the gas mask has no filter
 
wheyferret said:
I like this but I dont understand the use of the gas mask if all of his skin is exposed and the gas mask has no filter
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Honestly, I had no filter to use, but from a story perspective I look at it like this. He doesn't really need it. It's kind of like having a security blanket; it makes him feel safer. He's still breathing the air, he's still getting sick. I left it open, if not too much, and I think I'm going to add to it at one point. I just wanted to see what people thought of it as is. I'm glad you liked it!
 
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