Greetings to everyone here!
Like (I'm guessing) everyone here I'm an aspiring film maker. However I'm guessing I'm in a bit of a different boat to most of the people here...
I'm from Australia, but I'm currently living in Xi'an, China, and I'm about to start studying Chinese.
Anyway, the reason I'm posting is my girlfriend, some of her friends and I are currently planning on making a film.
My girlfriend is Chinese, but her English is superb, and she is an aspiring musician/actress, and I'm an aspiring director, so obviously... it's a match made in Heaven (or in this case, Xi'an).
I'm writing here to post some of the ideas we (or, mainly I) have had about the film. What follows is a very basic description, and it's not in excellent English as I wrote it so her friends could understand it.
The language of the film will be a mixture of English and Chinese, which will definitely be challenging, but hopefully it will work well.
What follows is the description I gave to the Chinese people. My apologies for the not-so-flash English, but I'm hoping to write up a more flowing and better detailed outline sometime in the near future.
Once again, my apologies for pretty shoddy descriptions there, but I hope you can all look past that.
I'm aware that in those descriptions the character arcs are almost non-existent, but I've explained them to my gf and written them down on various notes. Any opinions on the overall story or whatever would be appreciated.
My gf feels that the basic story is too common, which is also my worry =/
Her other suggestion was that showing the state of mind of the main character could be interesting...
Any thoughts, opinions or what-have-you are appreciated.
Like (I'm guessing) everyone here I'm an aspiring film maker. However I'm guessing I'm in a bit of a different boat to most of the people here...
I'm from Australia, but I'm currently living in Xi'an, China, and I'm about to start studying Chinese.
Anyway, the reason I'm posting is my girlfriend, some of her friends and I are currently planning on making a film.
My girlfriend is Chinese, but her English is superb, and she is an aspiring musician/actress, and I'm an aspiring director, so obviously... it's a match made in Heaven (or in this case, Xi'an).
I'm writing here to post some of the ideas we (or, mainly I) have had about the film. What follows is a very basic description, and it's not in excellent English as I wrote it so her friends could understand it.
The language of the film will be a mixture of English and Chinese, which will definitely be challenging, but hopefully it will work well.
What follows is the description I gave to the Chinese people. My apologies for the not-so-flash English, but I'm hoping to write up a more flowing and better detailed outline sometime in the near future.
This role is going to be played by my girlfriend. She'll be speaking in Chinese and English (probably about 40/60 percentage-wise).Main person is a young girl who is finishing school. Her father left her mother before she was born, and her mother died during childbirth. She lives with her aunt (when she's not living at university (which is the norm in China).
She has a disease (to be researched and detailed soon).
Even though she's very sick, she always try to do everything by herself, and she doesn't want people to help her.
This role is going to be played by none other than myself. Unfortunately I'm not THAT great on film, however I think I can roll up the socks and put on a decent performance for this role. I'll be speaking in almost entirely English, with a few bits of Chinese. 95/5 would be the percentage.There is a foreign boy who came to China because he didn't know what he wanted to do after he finished school. He decided to go to China, because it is a very different country to his own. He meets the girl (you). The girl doesn't tell the boy she is sick, and helps him with many things he needs (because he knows nothing about China). The boy and girl spend a lot of time together and start to fall in love, but the girl doesn't want to love the boy because she is sick, and she doesn't want him to need to look after her, and she doesn't want to hurt him.
This role will (hopefully) be played by my girlfriend's friend, who's also an aspiring musician/actress. She'll be speaking mostly Chinese, probably 80/20.The girl's best friend. The only person the girl will let help her when she needs it, and the only person except for her aunt who she trusts. Worries about the girl and the foreign boy, because she thinks its bad for the girl to love someone when she is sick and most likely going to pass away, but also knows that it makes the girl happy so she doesn't want to stop her from being with him.
The girl finds out about her disease at the very start of the movie, and it obviously makes her feel very sad, but she doesn't want her friends or anyone to know about it, so she and her Aunt agree not to tell anyone yet.
The foreign boy arrives in China, and he and the girl meet each other (I don't know where they will meet yet).
When the boy and girl meet, because the girl is sick she accidentally hurts herself, and the boy helps her to go to the doctor.
The girl decides to help the boy, because he knows no one in China. When she is helping the boy, she has a few problems because she is sick. The boy can see that she is sick, but when he asks the girl, she tells him she is ok. The boy does not keep asking, but tries to look after the girl.
One day when the girl is at university/having fun with friends, she has a very bad accident and gets hurt, and her best friend takes her to her aunts home and helps look after her. The girl's Aunt then tell's the girl's best friend about her disease.The foreign boy finds out that the girl had a very bad accident and tries to talk to her, but the girl's Aunt will not let her talk to her, so the foreign boy tries to talk to the girl's best friend.
The girl's best friend doesn't tell the boy anything, so the boy says that if she needs any help he will help her.
The girl continues to help the boy, even though she is sick. It is easy for the boy to see that she is sick, but he knows she doesn't want him to know, so he does not talk about it. The girl tries to live her life normally, but it is difficult for her. After some time, it is too hard for her to go anywhere alone. The Aunt and the girl's best friend decide it is time for her to stop going to class. The girl doesn't like this, but after talking with her Aunt, she agrees to have class at home.
The boy comes to her home almost everyday to help her study English, and also so that she has someone to talk to.
Everytime he is at her home, she tries to act like nothing is wrong. The boy thinks the girl is very good for being so strong and not letting her disease stop her from doing the things she likes.
The Aunt agrees to let the girl still have fun with her friends.
After a short tmie, the girl is too sick of leave her home. Her friends still come to see her and talk, and the boy still comes everyday. The girl still tries to talk about thigns she will do when she is older. She talks about getting married, having a job to help people, and having a family, but she knows it is impossible to have any of that. The boy tries to make everything she wants come true, but it is impossible.
Eventually, the girl gets too ill to continue on and passes away.
The boy admires the girl for trying to live a normal life for a long time, even when she was sick, and he is inspired to spread her story to other people.
Once again, my apologies for pretty shoddy descriptions there, but I hope you can all look past that.
I'm aware that in those descriptions the character arcs are almost non-existent, but I've explained them to my gf and written them down on various notes. Any opinions on the overall story or whatever would be appreciated.
My gf feels that the basic story is too common, which is also my worry =/
Her other suggestion was that showing the state of mind of the main character could be interesting...
Any thoughts, opinions or what-have-you are appreciated.