Hi all,
Im completely noob with a unique opportunity for shorting in an exotic location (to me anyway) due to my real job requiring me to travel to Israel. Iv been there several times already and have some locations in mind, etc.
Since this travel opportunity was sprung on me in the last week, I threw together an outline of a story that could utilize some of the locations Ill be visiting.. airports, etc... I see this being a real SHORT film, maybe 5 - 10 mins at most.
Of course, as its Israel I gravitated to a religious theme. The challenge for me in the remote location stuff is that I DON'T want to be the star, but obviously "someone" will need to be in the remote shots.. or maybe not? Any ideas would be helpful.. So far, I'm leaning towards no-dialog (contrary to the outline below) with no face shots, just my hands, details stuff.. etc.. seems like a cliche though..
Its not important that I nail all the details of the story just yet, rather, I need to focus on the travel and Israel photography aspect, as I leave next week!
Here is the outline, just a couple of paragraphs.. with some alternate endings..
"The man comes around" is a "Quest" story about a non religious man who becomes interested in the story of the 2nd coming of Christ. Through his own research he becomes convinced that he knows exactly when and where the 2nd coming of Christ will occur.
Paradoxically he is a "non-believer", so he develops his own explanatory cosmology and off the wall interpretations of the Bible that enables him to continue in his non Christian life style. (opportunity for dark humor \ Irony \ Dialog elements ?)
He beings his quest to be an eye witness to the event. He is obsessed, and much like a drug addict, loses his family, his job, etc. As the character develops through the last stages of his quest we see his drive change from obsession, to resignation. As he learns more about the "mythos" of the 2nd coming, he comes to believe that he will NOT be one of the chosen who are "saved." He arrives at his final destination convinced that the coming of "event" will be a personal end of the line for him, he will be burned like chaff etc..
The appointed time and place reached, he waits.. for suspense the time passes and nothing happens, but then he rips out his tattered pocket notebook with calculations and sees that he miscalculated by some small amount and looks up just in time to see....
Ending 1:
Christ descending over the old city of Jerusalem in splendor and glory.
Fade to white with the sounds of trumpets
Ending 2:
Same as "ending 1", the sounds of the trumpets morph into explosions of a nuclear blast... supported by script showing mounting conflicts in the region, or missing suitcase nuke etc..
(Ironic, if he hadn’t come to see the event, he would be safe at home watching on TV like everyone else.. )
Ending 3:
Just the nuke blast, no Christ, supported by script showing conflicts as well as the mans unwitting participation (maybe his suitcase is switched and he transports the critical piece of the bomb, or something like that)
...
here are the first few scenes Iv come up with..
INTRODUCTIONS
We meet the man, he is normal, well adjusted and generally happy. He meets the "missionary" who gives him a bible.
--------------------------------
NOT TODAY
The man enters his home, he tosses the bible, wallet and car keys on the table, next to an ad of "ladies night" or something like that.. he picks up the ad, grabs his keys and wallet, checking his wallet for a condom and heads out. The bible is forgotten on the table.
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NIGHT TRAIN
Man comes home drunkenly dropping his keys and wallet on the same table, a female hands reaches for the wallet and condom...
<TO BE CONTINUED>
.....
Im completely noob with a unique opportunity for shorting in an exotic location (to me anyway) due to my real job requiring me to travel to Israel. Iv been there several times already and have some locations in mind, etc.
Since this travel opportunity was sprung on me in the last week, I threw together an outline of a story that could utilize some of the locations Ill be visiting.. airports, etc... I see this being a real SHORT film, maybe 5 - 10 mins at most.
Of course, as its Israel I gravitated to a religious theme. The challenge for me in the remote location stuff is that I DON'T want to be the star, but obviously "someone" will need to be in the remote shots.. or maybe not? Any ideas would be helpful.. So far, I'm leaning towards no-dialog (contrary to the outline below) with no face shots, just my hands, details stuff.. etc.. seems like a cliche though..
Its not important that I nail all the details of the story just yet, rather, I need to focus on the travel and Israel photography aspect, as I leave next week!
Here is the outline, just a couple of paragraphs.. with some alternate endings..
"The man comes around" is a "Quest" story about a non religious man who becomes interested in the story of the 2nd coming of Christ. Through his own research he becomes convinced that he knows exactly when and where the 2nd coming of Christ will occur.
Paradoxically he is a "non-believer", so he develops his own explanatory cosmology and off the wall interpretations of the Bible that enables him to continue in his non Christian life style. (opportunity for dark humor \ Irony \ Dialog elements ?)
He beings his quest to be an eye witness to the event. He is obsessed, and much like a drug addict, loses his family, his job, etc. As the character develops through the last stages of his quest we see his drive change from obsession, to resignation. As he learns more about the "mythos" of the 2nd coming, he comes to believe that he will NOT be one of the chosen who are "saved." He arrives at his final destination convinced that the coming of "event" will be a personal end of the line for him, he will be burned like chaff etc..
The appointed time and place reached, he waits.. for suspense the time passes and nothing happens, but then he rips out his tattered pocket notebook with calculations and sees that he miscalculated by some small amount and looks up just in time to see....
Ending 1:
Christ descending over the old city of Jerusalem in splendor and glory.
Fade to white with the sounds of trumpets
Ending 2:
Same as "ending 1", the sounds of the trumpets morph into explosions of a nuclear blast... supported by script showing mounting conflicts in the region, or missing suitcase nuke etc..
(Ironic, if he hadn’t come to see the event, he would be safe at home watching on TV like everyone else.. )
Ending 3:
Just the nuke blast, no Christ, supported by script showing conflicts as well as the mans unwitting participation (maybe his suitcase is switched and he transports the critical piece of the bomb, or something like that)
...
here are the first few scenes Iv come up with..
INTRODUCTIONS
We meet the man, he is normal, well adjusted and generally happy. He meets the "missionary" who gives him a bible.
--------------------------------
NOT TODAY
The man enters his home, he tosses the bible, wallet and car keys on the table, next to an ad of "ladies night" or something like that.. he picks up the ad, grabs his keys and wallet, checking his wallet for a condom and heads out. The bible is forgotten on the table.
----------------------
NIGHT TRAIN
Man comes home drunkenly dropping his keys and wallet on the same table, a female hands reaches for the wallet and condom...
<TO BE CONTINUED>
.....