But this is a blockbuster film...
It's my personal preference that less is more when it comes to trailers. I feel as too many trailers give too much away, which I feel takes away from the experience while watching the film. One of my favorite trailers ever was the teaser to Gravity. I happened to love the movie, but the trailer was awesome. It captured the feel of the whole movie while keeping everything to a minimum.
Regardless, I thought your edit flowed well and was obviously focused on telling the story instead of focusing on the action. While I respect that, I think there are two main flaws with doing this. Number one, I don't want to be exposed to that much of the story before I have seen the film for the aforementioned reason. Number two, as this is primary an action movie, I think the trailer should appeal to my demographic.