Hey,
So this is the first draft of my first short film. I still need to do a lot of editing (color, cropping, zoom, transitions) but this draft should give you a good idea of story/style/mood.
Please give me your brutally honest advice.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f3_NpTZQlVE
So this is the first draft of my first short film. I still need to do a lot of editing (color, cropping, zoom, transitions) but this draft should give you a good idea of story/style/mood.
Please give me your brutally honest advice.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f3_NpTZQlVE