Why did you decide to have so much v/o in it?
I don't think I can identify the protagonist's challenge, and how she takes it on, btw. There's a lot of feeling sorry for oneself, but not the struggle to overcome. Come to think of it, it's not 'til she's picking up the buzz-cutters right at the end that she's even ready to admit that it's her challenge.
Things looked really good, though. Camerawork was better than expected. Good variety of techniques, too. Actors were fine, too. Locations are top-notch.
Production-wise, it's really good. I just think the story could have used more tweaking 'cos I don't think you ended up showing what you were meaning to.
The YT page says it's gonna be showing at a filmfest soon? That's cool! Close enough to go see it?