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watch It's Not Funny - PSA

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sleightlyprismatic

Hey guys, I just wanted to get some feedback on this short I made for a "don't text and drive" campaign.

http://youtu.be/dK-MmuJYV-U

I think the idea was really good, but for some reason the pacing didn't exactly convey the level of humor I was looking for. Any comments about that?

Thanks!
Luke
 
I liked the footage a lot. The humor was good, too. Nice pacing with the cuts. I would cut the kitchen scene as the fire was a little fake looking and wasn't as high of stakes as people dying or getting their car stolen. :)
 
I wouldn't think you would want to be funny. That being the case, I would have had some kids die in a car accident or something like that.

This video, I couldn't take seriously as a campaign.
 
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