Formatting hasn't come to me the way I hoped it would. Is the following part of my screenplay correct? and is the content itself good?
JOHNNY HANDEN walks down a street of nothingness in the gloomy night, only lit by the bright street lights. A long walk before he enters a building seemingly with the same lack of population.
JOHNNY enters, this preconceived notion of desolation is shattered by bustling music and an array of drunks and gangsters, dancing, partying, as if it was their last day on Earth. The smoke of drugs and cigarettes fill up the room with a tint of moving grey, the smell of sex can be still be smelt and not derailed by the stench of another sleaze. JOHNNY walks by, disregarding everyone and everything, like an alien and sticking out like a sore thumb, completely unaffected by the excessive nightlife.
He goes to a door labelled DRAKE “The Top” MANNER, takes a pop of pills obscured by distance, presumingly for nervousness and/or staying awake as the tiredness radiates from his eyes visibly.
JOHNNY opens the door.
The room is fancy, somewhat classy. Opposite to the operation of sordid on the outside, the table is fiddled with paperwork, though in an organised manner.