Here is a small idea I came up earlier today, but I can't figure out how I can end it! Do you guys have some ideas??
Sorry for the lengthy ptext, but I wrote it up as a future reference for myself as well, since I don't have paper or pen to write with
Its for something that is about 30 min long, drama/action type of a short
Two brother are down on their luck, having nothing to their name, and turn to the crime. They plan a quick robbery, with out anyintention of hurting anybody. Their plan is to wait until its dark, and rob a person by ATM. They wait it out, and rob a person, who turns out to be an elderly guy. He has a heart attack during the robbery, and collapses on the scene. Brother 1 freak out, because when police will replay atm camera footage, video will show robbers and they might fall under suspicion of a murder. While the other one (brother 2) is going through the mans jacket, and steals his wallet. To calm down brother 2, brother 1 convinces brother 2 to put the body in the trunk of the car, and drop off the body somewhere further away from atm camera. Because they re next to a busy area, they decide to drop off the car and a body somewhere in nearby park. The car has almost no gas left, and starts to die. They pull over at a gas station, where they notice a cop car. The plan is to quickly run in, pay for gas and keep going.
When brother 1 gets in the gas station to pay for gas, a cop is talking to the clerk, talking about lotto. Brother 1, takes out some cash out of stolen wallet (from the old man), clerk notices a lotto ticket in the wallet. He says that its the last day to scan the ticket. Under glaring eyes of police brother 1 takes out lotto ticket. Clerk scans it, and surprising tells that its the winning ticket, andhe just won $500 dollars. Clerk happily asks for ID to claim the winning, on which brother hesitates, but gives clerk an ID of old man. He just doesn't want to ask suspicious infront of the cop. Clerk glances at brother 1, then at id, then at the cop.. Quickly, brother 2 gets behind the cop, and snatches cops gun out of cops hollister...
Then what?????
Sorry for the lengthy ptext, but I wrote it up as a future reference for myself as well, since I don't have paper or pen to write with
Its for something that is about 30 min long, drama/action type of a short
Two brother are down on their luck, having nothing to their name, and turn to the crime. They plan a quick robbery, with out anyintention of hurting anybody. Their plan is to wait until its dark, and rob a person by ATM. They wait it out, and rob a person, who turns out to be an elderly guy. He has a heart attack during the robbery, and collapses on the scene. Brother 1 freak out, because when police will replay atm camera footage, video will show robbers and they might fall under suspicion of a murder. While the other one (brother 2) is going through the mans jacket, and steals his wallet. To calm down brother 2, brother 1 convinces brother 2 to put the body in the trunk of the car, and drop off the body somewhere further away from atm camera. Because they re next to a busy area, they decide to drop off the car and a body somewhere in nearby park. The car has almost no gas left, and starts to die. They pull over at a gas station, where they notice a cop car. The plan is to quickly run in, pay for gas and keep going.
When brother 1 gets in the gas station to pay for gas, a cop is talking to the clerk, talking about lotto. Brother 1, takes out some cash out of stolen wallet (from the old man), clerk notices a lotto ticket in the wallet. He says that its the last day to scan the ticket. Under glaring eyes of police brother 1 takes out lotto ticket. Clerk scans it, and surprising tells that its the winning ticket, andhe just won $500 dollars. Clerk happily asks for ID to claim the winning, on which brother hesitates, but gives clerk an ID of old man. He just doesn't want to ask suspicious infront of the cop. Clerk glances at brother 1, then at id, then at the cop.. Quickly, brother 2 gets behind the cop, and snatches cops gun out of cops hollister...
Then what?????