Hello, Looking for some feedback!

[erikbakhshi]

Hi everyone. if you have 5 minutes can you please check out a short little documentary I made for school. I just want a little feedback on the editing and any tips would be very helpful. Thank you!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Om8RBEsSCG8&list=UU6yumIbzj9k-_ksRSO-hlUA&index=0&feature=plcp

 

[Zensteve]

Not bad at all.

Pleasantly surprised there was more substance than just a mish-mash of random tricks.

Editing & video is just fine. I think you'd get more out of developing the interviews, and the subsequent story generated from that.

You're off to a good start.

 

[mus]

It was really good... I particularly liked the intro in the beginning where the title rode along the sidewalk with the skateboard.

A few shots were a bit shaky, some were real shaky.

The music set the mood very well.

I would ease up on the color correction in some shots.

It seemed like something that could be put on 60 minutes as an educational video for ill-informed people who think the sport is vandalism on wheels.

Good Job.

 

[erikbakhshi]

Thank you so much. Appreciate it.

 

[MadHatter_2001]

Very nice, creative use of camera... I learned something from this... Cheers !

 

[hER]

i like the colors!