That was great. It snowballed nicely, uping the ante each scene. I wasn't caught at first (perhaps the lack of sound makes it seem slow, but you're workin on that). As the plot kept thickening, I was laughing out loud to the end. I like it because it has kind of a schticky feel, without being too obvious. There's little moments of humor that live right under the surface. Great job with that.
Jose was predictable, yes, but it looks like the "presumed dead" brother was the real twist. And Jose ties the title in during the credits. Very good.
I think another "shocking twist" would have been to have the girls make out together.