You know.....that special (and highly improbable) idea above all others that you wish you could have 100 million to make exactly the way you want to make?
Mine is a new adaptation of Frank Herbert's sci-fi masterpiece DUNE. And a definitive adaption to boot. Both film versions produced so far---Lynch's feature film and SyFi Channel's miniseries---had their individual strengths, but also serious flaws as well. Lynch's film was chopped to a brief 2 hours 15 minutes, destroying any sense of story pace, and the SyFi version had a script rhat went too far off the book at times and very dubious production design (ridiculous costumes and painted "desert" backdrops).
A few years ago, I wrote a 44-page treatment/outline/scriptment that not only got as much of the novel in as could be feasible, I actually expanded the story with Duncan Idaho, Princess Irulan, and the Spacing Guild having more presence in events. For instsnce, I have a scene of Duncan being personal bodyguard for Paul on the final Atredies ship to leave Caladan: they see the citizens weeping at the permanent leaving of House Atreidies. Paul talks about the loyalty people show his father, Duke Leto, and Duncan tells Paul of how he escaped from being a Harkonnenn slave to enlist with Duke Leto.
I just wanted to do the DUNE story and make it even deeper and dramatically strong by adding that kind of character detail. I wound up laying it out as three 2-hour films---6 hours is enough time for the expanded concept I had, with even more scenes added to a Bluray "Extended Version"..
There is my dream project: to write the defintive movie of DUNE.
I'd also like to adapt HP Lovecrafts SHADOW OVER INNSMOUTH.
Mine is a new adaptation of Frank Herbert's sci-fi masterpiece DUNE. And a definitive adaption to boot. Both film versions produced so far---Lynch's feature film and SyFi Channel's miniseries---had their individual strengths, but also serious flaws as well. Lynch's film was chopped to a brief 2 hours 15 minutes, destroying any sense of story pace, and the SyFi version had a script rhat went too far off the book at times and very dubious production design (ridiculous costumes and painted "desert" backdrops).
A few years ago, I wrote a 44-page treatment/outline/scriptment that not only got as much of the novel in as could be feasible, I actually expanded the story with Duncan Idaho, Princess Irulan, and the Spacing Guild having more presence in events. For instsnce, I have a scene of Duncan being personal bodyguard for Paul on the final Atredies ship to leave Caladan: they see the citizens weeping at the permanent leaving of House Atreidies. Paul talks about the loyalty people show his father, Duke Leto, and Duncan tells Paul of how he escaped from being a Harkonnenn slave to enlist with Duke Leto.
I just wanted to do the DUNE story and make it even deeper and dramatically strong by adding that kind of character detail. I wound up laying it out as three 2-hour films---6 hours is enough time for the expanded concept I had, with even more scenes added to a Bluray "Extended Version"..
There is my dream project: to write the defintive movie of DUNE.
I'd also like to adapt HP Lovecrafts SHADOW OVER INNSMOUTH.