I would love feedback on a short I just finished. It features a wiener dog, talking squeaky toys, a psychedelic dream, and rabbit truffles. I am trying to make it a concept that would appeal to children and adults, just like the best children's stories I love. Thanks for your feedback!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LO6DLGiVkJI
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LO6DLGiVkJI