watch A few shorts I made

[PerpendicularDog]

Hello all,
I just discovered this site, looking forward to interacting with you all. Here are links to some short films I made with a bay area filmmaking club. All the films were conceived, written and shot in 5 hours, so they are by no means perfect but wanted to share them anyway.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rk-kJCKwMuI
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XRmp-Ab07Mw
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pesKInrW7kE

I am currently in pre-production on a "real" short, with script and crew, I will be sure to keep everyone updated on the progress.

Cheers!

 

[Sidewalkbowling]

Refreshingly real!

 

[Murdock]

The first one was funny, but took a while to get there. The sound was pretty bad.

The second one has potential, but the timing seemed off on the jokes. Were you guys doing something similar to 48Hr competition??

The third was the best of the three. Its pacing was a bit slow for me. I clicked through video and was still able to understand what was going on. That could mean there is a lot of dead space/extra stuff that doesn't need to be there.

I enjoyed them.