Hey everyone!
This is a short 5 page comedy script that was written last year for Kevin Spacey's Jameson competition where 3 would be selected in which he would star. Needless to say i didn't win. The requirements were that it be no longer 7 pages, title and all (if i remember correctly) and the chosen category was comedy.
I'm wondering just how good and entertaining my script actually was so any kind of feedback would be useful to me in the future. Did everything come across clearly? Were the jokes too subtle? Was it simply not funny? Anything that comes to your mind, feel free to throw it at me and dont worry about hurting my feelings.
Thanks for your time!
Ernest.
The Double
http://www.ernestworthing.com/the-double.html
And a big thanks to Murdock for helping me edit and format it.
This is a short 5 page comedy script that was written last year for Kevin Spacey's Jameson competition where 3 would be selected in which he would star. Needless to say i didn't win. The requirements were that it be no longer 7 pages, title and all (if i remember correctly) and the chosen category was comedy.
I'm wondering just how good and entertaining my script actually was so any kind of feedback would be useful to me in the future. Did everything come across clearly? Were the jokes too subtle? Was it simply not funny? Anything that comes to your mind, feel free to throw it at me and dont worry about hurting my feelings.
Thanks for your time!
Ernest.
The Double
http://www.ernestworthing.com/the-double.html
And a big thanks to Murdock for helping me edit and format it.