Guys I'm supposed to present this short film script to a client in the next 4days, it's supposed to be funny and thrilling.
Give me your hardest thoughts, inputs and critics on it, cos' this short film means a lot to me
Thank You
Give me your hardest thoughts, inputs and critics on it, cos' this short film means a lot to me
Thank You
Code:
EXT. STORE HOUSE
A vehicle pulls up from the corner of a street, the doors open up
and the baddest looking bodyguards and henchmen come out
and open the door for the Don Capoe
Everybody screams and runs away at the presence of the Don Capoe
He tries to maintain a mean and scary face.
INT. STORE
The Don Capoe, his bodyguards, henchmen and Translator
walk through a passage and head to where a captured
deaf man is handcuffed and fastened to a chair, the man is
receiving some blows from one of the henchmen when
Don Capoe steps in and takes a seat WHILE staring at
the deaf man who stole his Two Million Dollars.
The Don Capoe’s phone rings.
The Don Capoe answers his phone.
[CENTER]DON CAPOE
Hello honey, I’ve told you not to call me when I’m at the office[/CENTER]
The henchman throws a loud blow that distracts the phone call
[CENTER]DON CAPOE’S WIFE
[OVER PHONE] What’s that honey?[/CENTER]
The Don Capoe nervously answers
[CENTER]DON CAPOE
The President just walked in, I’ll call you later honey. I love you[/CENTER]
Everybody pauses when they hear the Don Capoe say “I Love You”
The Don Capoe walks over to the deaf man
[CENTER]DON CAPOE (CONT’D)
Where is my money?[/CENTER]
The Translator translates to the deaf man
[CENTER]TRANSLATOR
[SIGN LANGUAGE] Where is the money
DEAF MAN
[SIGN LANGUAGE] I don't know
DON CAPOE
So you feel it’s because you’re deaf, that’s why
you can steal my Two Million Dollars. Deck this guy![/CENTER]
The henchman slams another punch on the deaf guys face
[CENTER]DON CAPOE (CONT’D)
I said where is my money?
TRANSLATOR
[SIGN LANGUAGE] Where is the money
DEAF MAN
[SIGN LANGUAGE] I don’t know, please I’m innocent
TRANSLATOR
He said he is innocent
DON CAPOE
Nobody steals my money and gets away with it, nobody[/CENTER]
The Don Capoe snaps his fingers signaling the henchman to continue punching the deaf guy
[CENTER]DEAF MAN
[SIGN LANGUAGE] Please stop beating me, the money is
in the brief case behind the cupboard[/CENTER]
The Translator thinks before speaking
[CENTER]TRANSLATOR
[THOUGHTS] Two Million Dollars
TRANSLATOR (CONT’D)
[SIGN LANGUAGE] Are you sure?
DEAF MAN
[SIGN LANGUAGE] Yes
TRANSLATOR
He said you are crazy bastard and the biggest fool he has ever met.
He says your mum and dad are all crazy and that you don’t have the balls to shoot him.
He said he dares you to go ahead and shoot him.
DON CAPOE
He said all that?[/CENTER]
The Translator nods.
[CENTER]DON CAPOE (CONT’D)
Guys, collect the briefcase from behind the cupboard (commanding the bodyguards)[/CENTER]
The bodyguards check behind the cupboard and they find the briefcase with the
Two Million Dollars.
[CENTER]DON CAPOE (CONT’D)
Guys, reshape this translators face, so his parents don’t recognize him[/CENTER]
The Translator feels confused
[CENTER]DON CAPOE (CONT’D)
I know sign language fool[/CENTER]
The Don Capoe and some henchmen and the bodyguards exit the room
with the Two Million Dollars in the briefcase, some henchmen remain.
Loud punches and screams are heard from outside the door.
[RIGHT]END[/RIGHT]