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Thank you very much. As I finish cutting the film over the next month, I'm going to put some more scenes on youtube, if you subscribe to my channel you'll get notified when a new one gets added. I appreciate the feedback.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=r-R-A41E_xY I'm still in post, by the way. thanks!

'An aimless college graduate is facing a dreaded future with the family business. Trying to avoid the harsh realities tomorrow will bring, he spends his last day in town with two high school friends looking for adventure and escape.'

Media Hero and Alphie. That is good stuff, I really dig it. My computer is going to be down for a few days and I won't have internet access. I'll be back sunday.

Another tweak. 'An aimless college graduate spends his last day in town with two high school friends, before leaving to join the family business, retreating from the harsh realities of the adult world as they dream of adventure and escape.'

First of all, I would like to say that I really appreciate the help I've gotten here and I already feel my logline has improved dramatically as a result. I would like to say THANK YOU VERY MUCH. on my most recent update of the logline. 'An aimless college graduate spends his last day in town...

'An aimless college graduate spends his last day in town with two high school friends, before leaving to join the family business, retreating from the harsh realities of the adult world dreaming of adventure and escape.'

I like that knightly!

Oops. posted twice.

Another version. 'An aimless college graduate spends his last day in town with two high school friends before leaving to join the family business. Trying to cope with the harsh realities of the adult world they while away the time getting high, dreaming of adventure and escape.'

Well, I'm trying to get this down to one concise sentence, and the film is not about finding out friends are more important than success which sounds kind of trite. Also, in response to Filmjumper, yeah I don't tell you what happens because it's just a one sentence description of the film. I'm...

That's very nice. Actually I've lost that earlier synopsis as I only typed it here and didn't think it was very good. Here's a new rough "rough draft", trying to put some new ideas in the mix. 'An aimless college graduate, being pressured to join the family business, spends his last day in...

back to the drawing board.

A film can't be all things to all people I guess. You guys should remember you're bashing a film you haven't seen, and there are lots of movies where "stuff happens" and it can still be pretty boring. Here's an example. I took it off the dvd box. Logline from American Graffiti - 'The coming of...

Hey Filmjumper, A little cleaned up version. 'An aimless college graduate spends his last day in town with two high school friends before leaving to join the family business. They while away the time getting high, dreaming of adventure and escape.'

Okay guys, I've tried to get to the heart of the story. Here's a new rough draft. 'An aimless college graduate spends his last day in town, with two friends from high school, before moving to another state to join the family business. They while away the time getting high, dreaming of...

Hey guys and Filmjumper, Actually this is a feature length film I've already made. I'm still in post on it and I'm going to start trying this year to get it distributed. I appreciate the feedback and I'm going back to the drawing board on this. The hard part is getting those crucial details...

'A comedy about two friends struggling with failure, and boredom, as they medicate themselves with pot and other drugs.' Judging from the above sentence, what do you think the project is about and is it something you'd be interested in watching. thanks!