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    Opinion on an email from a producer/director

    Thank you for your advice everybody. I didn't get the gig after I showed him my feature sample. He said it was interesting but wasn't the right mind for what he needed. Good experience though. I have my sample script on this thread if you want to see: http://www.indietalk.com/showthread.php?t=56552
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    Opinion on an email from a producer/director

    Update: Okay so I stated I was interested in collaborating with this producer and requested certain details such as details of his story, deadlines, financing etc. He replied asking if I am an experienced write or I id do it as a hobby, so I told him that I am writer learning his craft for the...
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    Opinion on an email from a producer/director

    I will definitely share what's happening with this situation for others to know for if they find themselves in a similar position. At the moment no reply from him since yesterday, but obviously he could be busy.
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    Opinion on an email from a producer/director

    I've contacted him sweetie. Like you said, time to ask questions and make a descision. I need to build a reputation so I should be looking at this as an opportunity.
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    Opinion on an email from a producer/director

    @joejohn123, I included some extra info in post above yours before I saw your reply so not sure you seen the info?
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    Opinion on an email from a producer/director

    It's more because it's my first time contacting a producer. I'm not sure if usually they give you some sort of payment at the start when you write, afte the draft, whether they may say they won't pay unless it's financed, there the issues really. It's how to negotiate with him and follow it up...
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    Opinion on an email from a producer/director

    No you've covered everything, time for me to stop acting like a panzi and email him to get the details and make that decision. Thanks
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    Opinion on an email from a producer/director

    Thank you for your info. That was what I was worried about, the fact that this guy is talking to me out of all the people. Exciting at first, but apprehensive at the same time. I will discuss with him and see where it goes from there. The other thing which I forgot to mention was his last film...
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    Opinion on an email from a producer/director

    Hello, I've been working on a draft of my screenplay and hours I've finished my draft, I received an email from a person through inktip who wants his story idea developed into a screenplay. The only script I have on inktip is a short and I have been working on my craft for 18 months, so I...
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    Feedback on a tragic drama

    Hello, I have finally finished a full draft of my script. I've been tweaking it many times bit by bit but I am hoping that I am heading towards the right direction. I need feedback on my action writing and dialouge. Hopefully the story is good as well. I've provided a link to a sample of my...
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    Multiple scenes during a voice over

    @maz Thank you very much for your suggestion.
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    Multiple scenes during a voice over

    Hello, I'm in a bit of a pickle. I have a scene where a young girl is reading a letter, well the voice you here is from the older brother hence the voice over, but what I want to include is whilst reading the letter, flashbacks of previous events in the film are shown to tie up everything. But...
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    Reintroducing characters

    Hi, In my screenplay, I have my character's already introduced and I go along with the story in present time. Two thirds into the film, it shifts to four years later. Now in four years, some characters don't look different, but some do, especially teens. What I am asking is that after moving...
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    How to write a montage and series of shots efficiently in this example

    @FantasySciFi - Same as always, fantastic, detailed advice. Thank you again for your help and time. Much appreciated :) Anybody reading this, if FantasySciFi helps you with any issues you have, you're very fortunate.
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    How to write a montage and series of shots efficiently in this example

    Hello, Okay so I want to start my short script with various montages and series of shots. In my head seems easy, on paper... errr, probably not for me. This is what I am trying to do, explained in bullet point form and then below that is how I have structured it in my screenplay. The issue is...
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    I finished my screenplay but now I need some help

    Don't worry about the critique kid-filmmaker, the guys here are really helpful and not only give you knowledge on where you are at the moment as a writer, but their feedback will help shape you into a better writer. I can safely say thanks to the guys here that my writing is improving (I only...
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    Does scripts need to be copyright?

    I think it only deals with UK agents,producers etc only. I'm not sure if it is international based.
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    How to display reading off a text and then speaking?

    Thank you for your advice and help fantasyscifi, much appreciated :)
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    How to display reading off a text and then speaking?

    Hi, I have a scene in my script where a person who cannot speak uses her phone for communication by texting on her phone and then showing the text the person she is communicating to. The other person reads the text and then responds. My question is what is the best way to tackle this in a...
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    Rating my screenplay

    I will keep the honorifics which are only onii-chan and Akari-senpai, if it comes down to a bad decision on my part then I will live with it. My main priority is to sort my writing out first. If it was Japanese dubbed then they will change the words and make it sense, exactly the same as how...
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