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I liked it! Didn't seem rushed to me either. I'm by far an expert in cinematography, but I think your short is shot very nicely. The ligthing gives the short a dark ambiance which I think works out very well and compliments the story a lot. I must admit I'm not a huge fan of the voice over. I...

@Rayandmigdalia Very Nice list! @Maz I see, I'll edit the post and use your description of it. It might still be good to have on the list in case some one is looking for that kind of deal. Thanks for the clarification though :)

Great! I don't really know a lot either, but I'll try and get the list started :) Amazon Studios https://studios.amazon.com/ (I definitely suggest reading their terms of agreement carefully, before submitting anything) BBC - Writers Room http://www.bbc.co.uk/writersroom/send-a-script...

Hey All! I been thinking about making a list of production companies that accepts unsolicited scripts, synopses, etc. To make it easier for the users of Indietalk to get in contact with the right people. I reckon if we shared our knowledge on which production companies accepts material, we...

Would Love some feedback, Much appreciated :)

Hey All! Sorry I haven't replied or posted in the last couple of weeks. I've been quite busy :) I have reworked the pilot and gotten past some of the major problems with the script, such as the copyright issue (I think). I've also written together episode 1 and 2, which has made the pilot...

- Grin Well, he just needs a job to pay the bills. Like everyone else, I guess :) The reason he doesn't quit after his first day is because he thinks it's just a joke, but when he finds out it's not, he gains another reason to stay. (That happens in episode 2) Don't worry, English is not my...

Definitely worth it! It takes a little while to get used to the P.O.V. but it works out really well for this show :)

Sounds good to me, I'll definitely check it out :) Have you watched "Peep Show" before? Another great British comedy show and a personal favourite.

Haha, that's quite funny :) Never seen the show, is it worth watching?

First of, I think the premise of your short is great and very relatable. I heard a lot of stories about people losing loved ones to Alzheimers and how heartbreaking it is for those people. You write that the father resented the son before he lost his memory. Do you intend to elaborate on why...

Alien X - Thanks for the reply! I do want James to be sort of insecure about himself and have Steve be a manifastation of the traits he would like to have. Trackrabbit21 - Thanks for the reply! I'm glad you liked it! Yeah, Steve is just a regular talking toaster, with a bad attitude :) Thought...

Yeah, I thought about the copyright issues about using the horror characters. I guess I could create original supernatural killers, that could be used instead of the ones in the script? How about referencing those characters, would that be allowed? Anyway, thanks for the reply!

Hello Everyone! Last night I had an idea for a series, which I just couldn't get out of my head. So I decided to write up a pilot for the series and I would very much appreciate some feedback on it. Any tips on how I can tighten up the script or what could be changed for a better general read...

FantasySiFi: Thank you for your response, I'm happy you think it's a good start. I've only read a bit of Gaiman's Sandman series and really enjoyed it, so if you think it has a Neil Gaiman feel to it, I take that as a compliment :) I have finished the first chapter, which I will adapt to a...

Thank you for the replies :) I do understand there might be a problem with the excess amount of description. I initiallly wrote this as part of a graphic novel, where a lot of description is needed for the artist. But I see your point and will trim the script some more for the movie script thanks!

Sorry about the format, not quite sure how to do it properly. Anyway, this is the opening scene of a new project i've started writing on, so i'm looking for some critique and ways to improve the scene. Thanks in advance :) EXT. TOWN OF WOODHILL - DAY MR. HADDONFIELD, a mid-40's well dressed...

Thank you for taking your time to read it, i appreciate it a lot :) I agree with the QT tone of it, it's way to noticable (obviously not any where nearly as well executed) I think I'll go back and change it up a bit and see if i can't give it a more personal voice. Again, thanks for reading...

yes, i agree with you completly. I might go back and sweep the text of some of the swear words and change the generel tone of it a bit Although this scene was never really meant to be filmed, it will probably be a good exercise for me. do you have any further advice? Thanks for reading :)

Thanks a lot :) The scene has a lot of foul language in it. I don't wish to offend anybody, so you have been warned :) https://docs.google.com/document/d/1K3YY-NwlBmmFUYRyN3K3p9M3Jn6_kXOUT4d7xo8TR3w/edit