Hi All,
Sixth attempt at the short comedy "Flatmates", longer piece with several scenes. Feedback would be helpful.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DhwwLCky6oY
Jonny
Hi All,
Fifth attempt at the short comedy "Flatmates", quick, silly, short. Any feedback is welcome! :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IQPIC9c0ZsM
Jonny
Hi All,
Fourth attempt at the short comedy "Flatmates", exploring the different views on how people treat their friends. Let me know what you think, any comments are appreciated :-)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WFOcYfd28SI
Thanks, Jonny
Hi All,
Third attempt at the short comedy "Flatmates", shot this one over Christmas last year. Let me know what you think :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GnA1Y46V43M
Thanks, Jonny :)
Hi All,
This is my second comedy attempt for 'Flatmates'. I expanded on the characters, adjusted the shots, lighting and tried a slightly different writing style. The "book" was created as a prop by Cathy who also plays "Jill" in the short.
Please let me know what you think even if it's "OK"...