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  1. PassionPulp

    Opening scene to my script.

    That was pretty lovely I'd change the name of the killer though. The Reaper sound really generic and unimaginative. It can be more creative.
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    I have to choose a title:

    I'm crazy for one word film titles. And I believe it works very well with horror films. Jaws, Alien, Saw Not knowing anything about the film it's hard to vote on which title, but from the three Sawmiller's Daughter sounds best, but still a bit amateur.
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    show more than tell

    Lol. That is the worst advise I've ever heard.
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    Children and Horror

    I'll start off by saying I was an odd child, and I'm sure I've never grown out of it. And I've always had a pretty extensive memory. I've had a long-lived affair with Horror films. Sad to say, as this is true and I am now 16, meaning there has been some questionable factors in my upbringing. I...
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    Horror Cliche

    I've been a long time horror fan, like many film enthusiasts. So I almost feel an obligation to contribute to the genre. Something fresh too, not the stereotypical B or slasher movie. Because of this, I went out of my way to eliminate the cliches that bug me so much. Yes, it is about a group...
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    Who is planning on doing Script Frenzy?

    It's really no big deal. That's the point. There's no sanction to finishing or not finishing. Honestly, I think it's bad to set a time frame for writing. I never force writing, because I find when I do the substance is bland. Procrastination is good. I like to wait to write a scene, because I...
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    Chillin' with Jesus- a short film

    But... Elle killed Pai Mei... Maybe as a flashback, I can see it. Since Pai Mei hates the Japanese, it would be pretty funny to hear him berate Hanzo before killing him. I think it would be interesting for Kiddo to go against Hanzo.
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    Chillin' with Jesus- a short film

    Definitely Tarantino-esque. Overall enjoyed the read. Just wondering, you know your avatar isn't Hattori Hanzo?
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    Nuns and Cannibals

    You had me at 'nuns'.
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    Jaw/Javelina

    ^What I've been looking for. I like that you've implored reason. I completely understand how offputting all the description is. It's just how I write and I haven't gotten to editing it out. I do sometimes give directorial instructions, and I'm improving on limiting them. I used a Mexican...
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    Jaw/Javelina

    It appears to be troubling many, as I can't get a straight review.
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    Who is planning on doing Script Frenzy?

    as of now I'm shooting for quality, not quantity.
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    The Search: Short Film (2 Pages)

    for some reason it is frowned upon when you include camera shots in the screenplay. Really, if you feel the need to, let's see it. As long as it's your own personal project. If you're planning to distribute it for production, it would not be advised to include camera shots.
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    Jaw/Javelina

    I wouldn't say it's Fantasy. It's more surrealist. I do use a lot of detail when writing. I imagine the product being slow paced, so the detail gives it bulk and is really what is being focused on. Trust me, it is the edited version. It was once more lengthy. Neither titles have anything to do...
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    Jaw/Javelina

    I guess I'm doing the Script Frenzy ish. After about a year of mulling over one premise, I figured it's time to start raising this puppy. It's going better than I thought it would. The problem is that I feel what I have now is too short compared to all the substance that I've worked hard on...
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    Who is planning on doing Script Frenzy?

    I will reward myself with tubes and tubes of Neosporin.
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    Ya like?

    I appreciate it greatly. I was almost afraid that criticism would go towards the irrelevance of the storyline. I see it as a softcore surrealist horror. So there's a reason to the uncertainty of the plot. The problem that keeps me from advancing the story is the dialogue. But I'll keep adding...
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    Ya like?

    Tell me what you think http://crocodoc.com/UeQ8WBB
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    Eraserhead

    lol. rejected cartoons. as a freshman, me and my friends would reference it to death.
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    Eraserhead

    I've been obsessed with Salad Fingers for years.
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