Got some incredibly helpful feedback the last time I posted my work here, so I decided I'd ask you guys what I can improve on my new experimental drama:
http://www.scribd.com/doc/236087828/No-Jokes-Allowed-Draft-5
It's pretty odd - maybe too much so? Let me know what you think.
I agree with this. However, considering the worst aspects of the film were its composition and writing (essentially the only things Jardoss was truly responsible for), I don't think he's nearly as talented as you're assuming.
I don't mean to come across as an asshole - I'm just telling it like...
Hey guys,
I'm an aspiring writer-director living in Chicago. I've been seeking a good filmmaking board for a while now, and this seems like the place to be.
Glad to be here!
Hey everyone,
Currently working on a short script. This'll be the second thing I direct, and I'm looking to refine the screenplay as much as possible. I'm still very much an amateur, so any critique/input would be extremely helpful...