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    New Short Screenplay: "No Jokes Allowed" (4 Pages)

    Got some incredibly helpful feedback the last time I posted my work here, so I decided I'd ask you guys what I can improve on my new experimental drama: http://www.scribd.com/doc/236087828/No-Jokes-Allowed-Draft-5 It's pretty odd - maybe too much so? Let me know what you think.
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    watch First episode of CLOWNE is online!

    I agree with this. However, considering the worst aspects of the film were its composition and writing (essentially the only things Jardoss was truly responsible for), I don't think he's nearly as talented as you're assuming. I don't mean to come across as an asshole - I'm just telling it like...
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    Hey from Chicago.

    Northwest Side - near Elmwood Park.
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    Hey from Chicago.

    Hey guys, I'm an aspiring writer-director living in Chicago. I've been seeking a good filmmaking board for a while now, and this seems like the place to be. Glad to be here!
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    Seeking feedback on a short script.

    Hey everyone, Currently working on a short script. This'll be the second thing I direct, and I'm looking to refine the screenplay as much as possible. I'm still very much an amateur, so any critique/input would be extremely helpful...
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