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Well.. Personally I didn't enjoy it. The people talk like they are immature teenagers. Soldiers respect their superiors and they don't act like kids when they are charged. As for the trial, I don't think the person who is the victim is also allowed to be the judge. The trial is exceedingly...

Hi. thank- you for your feedback! Thanks for the help with the formatting! I will look into developing the characters and discuss with my AD the topic of a less predictable ending.

Hey everyone! I am a 16 year old film maker from Canada. I have finished my second script entitled "Intermittent". It is kind of cliche, but I am trying to work on telling a deeper story off of paper. I have done one previous film that I was unable to capture the story I was trying to tell...

Thanks! I think I will do that!

Hey, I am in a little bit of a pickle. I am looking at purchasing a Rokinon lens. I have a T3i so it has the 1.6x crop factor. A live in Canada, but I am in the states in a few weeks. I can get the 35mm for 520 canadian which is what I was planning to do. Today I found a used 24mm and 85mm...

NOTES: 2,3,4,5. You could probably scrap these first few scenes. They don't serve any purpose to the film. It would save time while filming. 8. Tyre should be tire. 11. The corridor is *dark?* 12. Stop them *from* finding you. 17. Alice is *standing*. (stood would be past and "is" is...

Thanks Bill! I think I'll wait and order out while I'm in the states. That will save me 80 bucks.

No offense, but it's really boring. Nothing happens, we don't care about the guy. We aren't sure if we should like the customer or the coach. I see that you tried for a twist, but since nobody cares about him, the twist has no emotional appeal. the climax is about taxes, pretty boring...

Hey, thanks for the suggestion. I have looked into it, but since our dollar is sh*t it still balances out to 530ish :/

Hey. I was looking into buying a Rokinon 35mm T1.5 lens for my Canon T3i. I live in the great white north so prices are a little stiff. I have figured I can get one for 530 if I wait six weeks (I shoot a short in 2 weeks) and get on in the States or I can buy a Nikon version of the lens and...

Hey, I am shooting a short film in a few weeks time. If you are interested in helping out that would be awesome. It is a dark drama. Email: gopromomentme@Gmail.com

Hmmm.... Thats tough. I mean you could always talk to your teacher, but that can go either way. You could also just tell him he is being a dick (maybe not quite like that) and tell him that not all of his ideas are gold and neither are yours. I can't relate to a problem like that in a film...

Hey :) I happen to be the same age from Canada as well. Im definatley interested in bouncing some ideas back and forth :) email: gopromomentme@gmail.com

I would, but there isn't exactly a link....

Very intriguing. Love the idea and the pace is pleasant. Only thing that I didn't think worked was his sudden acceptance that he committed the crime and that he was guilty. Would he not be angry that he going to die. I did see that he bounce's around a bit. (I think you write this in...