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    Critique my short script

    Well.. Personally I didn't enjoy it. The people talk like they are immature teenagers. Soldiers respect their superiors and they don't act like kids when they are charged. As for the trial, I don't think the person who is the victim is also allowed to be the judge. The trial is exceedingly...
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    Looking for Feedback on my Second Script (Short Film)

    Hi. thank- you for your feedback! Thanks for the help with the formatting! I will look into developing the characters and discuss with my AD the topic of a less predictable ending.
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    Looking for Feedback on my Second Script (Short Film)

    Hey everyone! I am a 16 year old film maker from Canada. I have finished my second script entitled "Intermittent". It is kind of cliche, but I am trying to work on telling a deeper story off of paper. I have done one previous film that I was unable to capture the story I was trying to tell...
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    ROKINON 35mm or 24mm + 85mm?

    Thanks! I think I will do that!
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    ROKINON 35mm or 24mm + 85mm?

    Hey, I am in a little bit of a pickle. I am looking at purchasing a Rokinon lens. I have a T3i so it has the 1.6x crop factor. A live in Canada, but I am in the states in a few weeks. I can get the 35mm for 520 canadian which is what I was planning to do. Today I found a used 24mm and 85mm...
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    Sci Fi Screenplay Critiques.

    NOTES: 2,3,4,5. You could probably scrap these first few scenes. They don't serve any purpose to the film. It would save time while filming. 8. Tyre should be tire. 11. The corridor is *dark?* 12. Stop them *from* finding you. 17. Alice is *standing*. (stood would be past and "is" is...
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    ROKINON 35mm Lens + Question

    Thanks Bill! I think I'll wait and order out while I'm in the states. That will save me 80 bucks.
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    5 minutes, one scene short movie - the life coach

    No offense, but it's really boring. Nothing happens, we don't care about the guy. We aren't sure if we should like the customer or the coach. I see that you tried for a twist, but since nobody cares about him, the twist has no emotional appeal. the climax is about taxes, pretty boring...
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    ROKINON 35mm Lens + Question

    Hey, thanks for the suggestion. I have looked into it, but since our dollar is sh*t it still balances out to 530ish :/
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    ROKINON 35mm Lens + Question

    Hey. I was looking into buying a Rokinon 35mm T1.5 lens for my Canon T3i. I live in the great white north so prices are a little stiff. I have figured I can get one for 530 if I wait six weeks (I shoot a short in 2 weeks) and get on in the States or I can buy a Nikon version of the lens and...
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    Hey, new here, and want to offer my music skills for free!

    Hey, I am shooting a short film in a few weeks time. If you are interested in helping out that would be awesome. It is a dark drama. Email: gopromomentme@Gmail.com
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    Problems with film partner...

    Hmmm.... Thats tough. I mean you could always talk to your teacher, but that can go either way. You could also just tell him he is being a dick (maybe not quite like that) and tell him that not all of his ideas are gold and neither are yours. I can't relate to a problem like that in a film...
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    Teen Screenwriters

    Hey :) I happen to be the same age from Canada as well. Im definatley interested in bouncing some ideas back and forth :) email: gopromomentme@gmail.com
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    anyone want to critique the first act of my scifi thriller?

    I would, but there isn't exactly a link....
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    1st Draft - Any and all feedback is welcome… even the crazy stuff.

    Very intriguing. Love the idea and the pace is pleasant. Only thing that I didn't think worked was his sudden acceptance that he committed the crime and that he was guilty. Would he not be angry that he going to die. I did see that he bounce's around a bit. (I think you write this in...
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    Critique my short screenplay

    Well, it wasn't bad. I have no idea what happened at the end. Did she leave him? Was she a ghost? We didn't know anything about her either. I thought she was a sister or something, but it sounds like she was a girlfriend? There was no emotion when she wasn't in the kitchen. Nobody really...
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    What do I get next?

    Alright. I am a 16 year old film maker. I have finished two shorts so far, both are action shorts. I have a Canon T3i with a RODE Go mic. I have lights, a flycam stabalizer, a spider steady, tripod, and a few lenses (Kit, 50mm 1.8, 75-300mm) I am wondering what I should look into adding to...
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    Opinions on my equipment?

    No I don't mean the 35mm. I found something online for $300 that is a 30mm.
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    Opinions on my equipment?

    What if I went with something like a Sigma DG 30 mm? Much better speed. I would have to just be patient to find a deal on it though as it is crawling up near the top end of my budget.
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    Opinions on my equipment?

    Ill definitely look for an affordable 30mm lens. As for sound, the first little bit (probably over the summer) will just be me getting the hang of camera settings, shooting angles, and trying to get the hang of the basics. As I progress I will of course be in the need for a half decent...
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