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screenplay The Soft Parade (101 pgs. sci-fi/action/drama): Looking for feedback

Title: The Soft Parade
Genre: Sci-fi/Action/Drama
Logline: As a member of a doomsday cult, a spry zealot is spiritually strained in the months preceding a baneful tribulation.
Pages: 102
Feedback: Does the world feel somewhat grounded? Does the dialogue feel melodramatic?
Trade: Indeed!
Rating: R

Note: This is meant to be a satirical analysis of the Star Wars franchise and other films a kin to it

PDF/Google Drive Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1NEvGM-wA2hJiVu67KmQn87nkwqKvQQpd/view?usp=sharing
ReadThrough Link: https://readthrough.com/d/JL3gh3y7PST5F0Rx4A3QHwlxbL8dkk
https://readthrough.com/d/JL3gh3y7PST5F0Rx4A3QHwlxbL8dkk
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Soundtrack (if you're curious):
 
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