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Old 06-12-2017, 07:41 PM   #1
Bayma
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Windows Media Player BioAberta - Trailer #1 (Feedback)

Hey guys, this video is a 30seg trailer from a after-movie I'll release august 10.
Is the first time I publish my videos online and i would love some feedback on it. What i did right? What i did wrong? what i could change?



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Old 06-14-2017, 09:29 AM   #2
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Looks Good - Got the Vibrance & Movement for the Piece of Music but I would of used a more Visual Font not that it is not okay but lacks clarity over the footage. I would of brought the Text in Animated (timed) & slowed down the Spinning Flower & created some forward motion - Looking Good though

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