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Old 09-04-2016, 03:13 PM   #1
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Thumbs Up need some feedback on my short film! Rushed project.

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Old 09-04-2016, 04:52 PM   #2
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Jolly good show.

You sure you rushed that? Dont be trying to get extra props. It was good. Carry demons since his childhood.
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Good job!
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Old 09-14-2016, 03:51 AM   #4
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I liked it! Didn't seem rushed to me either.

I'm by far an expert in cinematography, but I think your short is shot very nicely. The ligthing gives the short a dark ambiance which I think works out very well and compliments the story a lot.

I must admit I'm not a huge fan of the voice over. I think that your short might have had a bigger (emotional) impact without it.

Again, this is just my personal opinion. All in all I think you made a great short and I will definitely check out your future short films.

Nice job!
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Old 09-25-2016, 01:46 PM   #5
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I like it too. Didn't seem rushed at all. Well, except for the fact that the old man's flashbacks had clothes and hair that seemed too contemporary. Otherwise, excellent film.
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