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Old 02-04-2014, 10:11 AM   #1
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Draw My Life Parody

Just a very short comedy sketch. Please let me have that sexy feedback!


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Old 02-04-2014, 10:16 AM   #2
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Morbidly funny. Good stuff.

I'm not familiar with the parody though? Is it a commercial of sorts?
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Old 02-04-2014, 10:30 AM   #3
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It's like a meme or something about people's lives, where they use a bunch of timelapsed drawings on a whiteboard, over a narration. I think it's mostly for big youtube stars, but I could be wrong. I've only seen two or three myself, but I've seen them on some channels from time to time.
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Old 02-04-2014, 11:17 AM   #4
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blood color was distracting
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Old 02-04-2014, 01:11 PM   #5
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I apologize.
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Old 02-04-2014, 01:16 PM   #6
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Despite a nice beginning, it seemed to be stretching a little material over too great a time frame.

And the "blood" was orange!
Tomato sauce? Not ketchup?

Although I am impressed with you not appearing to get any on the carpet.

Where's the V.O. come from (nice that it is)? That's not you, is it?

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Old 02-04-2014, 01:19 PM   #7
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I apologize.
no need to apologize. i'm doing a shoot on the 16th, apparently this is something in need to give more attention.

i found some fake blood on amazon but it can stain skin and clothes

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Old 02-04-2014, 01:52 PM   #8
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That WAS me in the VO. The blood was corn syrup and food dye. I wouldn't say it was orange, I just think it was a little brighter than it should've been. I'm going to darken it the next time I use it, I think blood's a little darker than that. Anyway, my hands are still stained from doing this
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Old 02-04-2014, 09:27 PM   #9
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Awesome work! Although the blood looked poor.
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Yeah... needed to be darker
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Old 02-05-2014, 09:39 AM   #11
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so what do ya'll think of my drawing skills? How bout it? Think I can be a famous painter one day?
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Illustrator.

Yes, famous in your child's K - 2 classes.
About third grade is when their skills exceed what we've seen here.
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Yes, famous in your child's K - 2 classes.
About third grade is when their skills exceed what we've seen here.
Painter. I plan to use the blood to paint with
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I'm selling a house this spring.
You can come paint the interior walls with me!

But you can't use blood.
Just semi-gloss latex.
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Old 02-05-2014, 03:40 PM   #15
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Haha, nice. I have seen a few of those, they are always pop ups, and then the person starts talking about how to get skinny fast or get girls or something.
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