There is alot of difference in the value of the building and the sky/foreground.
It looks to me as if you increased gamma over the entire scene, which makes the building look alot better, but you just killed your nice sky with overblown highlights (something not quite typical for late afternoons).
Id suggest you take a bit more time with this and seperatly grade your highlights, midtones and shadows.
That said: you add alot of red/yellow, which works pretty well on the building, but i'd suggest setting up a secondary grade to keep the sky blue, and the grass green. Personally I like adding just yellow to grass and sky, not that much red. The red makes it look fake.
Looking forward to the next iterations.
Last edited by Santhem; 08-05-2012 at 04:36 AM.