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so, just for fun, I looked at your site.
so here ya go. You wanted feed back, here it is.
You aren't not going to like this, but... SPEND SOME MONEY.
Get a web designer and rework the site to sell your film. Right now it's boring as , well, shall we say hell...
If you cannot draw, then get someone to draw some story boards, and some renderings from what will be the film. Create an interesting and intriguing couple of Film Posters and put them up on the site.
Write a decent synopsis with some excitement. This is a WAR drama... Good and Evil... It must have some smidgin of excitement in it... ...oh, and add a log line.
Where is your research about films of the same genre.. Where is your project plan? Where is your executive summary? Where is your basic budget estimate? Where are you character breakdowns?
Hire a Line Producer to spend a few days with you roughing out the budget, and the plan.
If you are trying to land a Producer, hire one for God's sake...
If you are looking for crew, then make the film at least SOUND interesting.
Definitely get your script reviewed by a professional screenwriter... Hire a ghost writer to help you. If the script is as dry as the site, it's never gonna fly.
Any way... I'm being brutal, because being nice isn't going to help you in the long run.
Bottom line if you don't believe in your project enough to spend some money putting together some decent marketing, no one else is going to believe in it either.
cheers
geo
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