Haha! I like it. You asked for honest, so...
The set-up kind of annoyed me. The (obviously intentional) over-acting didn't make me giggle or even care about what was going on. I honestly only put up with it for the sake of being able to comment on a fellow-filmmakers' short.
I'm glad I did, because the ending TOTALLY got me! I laughed my ass off.
If it were me, I would've played the first part a lot more straight. But then again, the way you did it, did
make me laugh at the end, so is it best as is?
I also watched the Kony one, and it killed me. F-ing hilarious! I loved it.
Your audio ain't so great. Not trying to chop you down, just giving you honest critique (and I understand the difficulties -- audio has practically been the bane of my existence).
BTW -- dang, Steve, you must keep a really tight schedule! It literally takes about 5-seconds to bypass the ads.