Was there a special reason for the headphone suggestion? I was expecting a soundmix more similar to Virtual Haircut, with a headsup like that. It was still a good stereo mix, mind you.
Lots of spooky stuff going on. For that slo-mo walking effect, was that all just in post? Or did you play with fps while shooting? Looked good, but not quite fluid.
Spoiler: The bit right before he gets creamed by the truck
... that's really the only jarring inconsistencey in the look of it all. With a locked down tripod, and a clean plate, you should be able to pull off that effect no prob. The illusion is broken immediately, by the wobbly background & rock-steady actor.
Everything else is solid & consistent. Lighting, colour, shot selection, editing.
So finish up the rest of the episodes. Can't leave me hanging like that, now.