The Future of Ads (short)

[Strid3r]

this is my second short ive made and it basically shows what the future of ads might look like. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wvpZhjStFLQ

any constructive criticism is appreciated.

[Heisenberg]

Good job there,
The story was fun, the timing was good and the actor did a fine job too, congrats!
I read one of the comments on youtube that said "what if [this film] was also an ad?" Have you thought about that as an alternative ending?
Anyway well done!

[Zensteve]

Heh, reminiscent of the omnipresent personlised commercials in Minority Report.

You really have to work on your interior lighting, btw.

[afaloth]

Enjoyed the story, reminded me a bit of a series called 'Black Mirror' which was shown over here in the UK. I agree with Zensteve on the lighting, and also I think the audio of the dialogue needs a bit of work, improvement over your last short though! Did you use your new mic this time?

[Strid3r]

Originally Posted by afaloth

Enjoyed the story, reminded me a bit of a series called 'Black Mirror' which was shown over here in the UK. I agree with Zensteve on the lighting, and also I think the audio of the dialogue needs a bit of work, improvement over your last short though! Did you use your new mic this time?

No I hadn't received my mic in time, but I have it now and I also got a couple LED lamps too. So that should help with the lighting.

Thank you everyone for your feedback. I really do appreciate it!